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Yen Sid, receives a message from an old friend of his asking for the assistance of a Keyblade Bearer. Dark and mysterious happenings have suddenly started appearing in Equestria. Sora is sent on a mission to take care of the situation starting by looking for the world's key hole and locking it.
As a request on Yen Sid's part, Sora will also remain there for a year to train and unlock abilities he Money Man - Various - 100% Black Octavo Volumen knew he had to prepare him for 2nd attempt at Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections Mark of Mastery and become a Keyblade Master.
However, he will need the help of his new friends to activate it until he can learn to do it on his own. Of course this doesn't mean he'll be the only one getting something out of this exchange. His friends will be gaining some new powers along with him. The question is, will they be able to take on the Darkness that is slowly making it's presence known to Equestria. One thing is certain: Things are gonna get crazy with Sora and the Elements of Harmony.
I do not own the background music, and it is optional for the reader to play them at certain parts of the story, you are free to not click on them if you feel like it. I Digital - Various - Trip To Paradise liking it already just hope you don't add to many KH character in here but other Love-Spy (Radio Version) - Mike Mareen - Love-Spy that nice first chapter keep up the good work.
Well it's a good start, although one problem I did notice is that you should only have one person talking in a paragraph in a few especially at the start you have multiple people talking in the same one and in one of those it gets a little confusing on who is talking to who.
I'm not sure I like the idea of him being a pony though, I would have thought it would be more interesting if he was human to be honest so I'm not sure I like this idea, since you said he was going to change back at times I really don't see the point in making him a pony if this is the case. Plus given that he has magic wouldn't a unicorn have been a better body for him?
I'm also pretty sure he's actually younger than the Mane 6 by a few years not older or the same age. He's 15 in Kingdom Hearts 2 and I'm pretty sure they are older given that they all have their own jobs, homes and stuff, at the very least like 19 to early 20s.
At least they seem like that given how their lives are in the show. You did seem to keep everyone in character which is also nice to see. One question is why just drop him randomly into the Everfree? Sure Forgive And Forget - Invented - sceneries of gold normally could handle things if he was human, but why not just outside of it?
Plus how come if Celestia knew about this she didn't seem to send Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections to Twilight and her friends? Something simple like "hey a visitor is coming and I need you to greet him at this point in time" basically?
It's kind of odd that she wasn't there to greet someone that knows nothing of her world or at the very least had someone she trusted like Twilight there to help him settle in.
Don't worry, at most the KH Characters you've seen in this prologue are bascially the only ones your gonna see in the future. Опус - Эпидемия - Сокровище Энии (File, Album, MP3) best if another KH Character did Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections in, it probably be Riku for like a short moment But I doubt that much anyone else will pop in, so your good, buddy I'm not entirely sure, if this is the name or if it's even spelled right probably not but was the world called Equess?
I would like to learn as much as I can for the future. It's not exactly pin point, but I wanted to it to be placed some time after the Whole Shining Armor and Cadence get married. I know I'll run into them eventually so I'm kind of preparing myself for that inevitability after I get some facts straight. And as for Spike being important: Yeeeeah, you could say that : although it might take a bit to get to that part so I hope it's worth the wait.
I'm afraid not. Only do to the fact that I didn't know such a character existed until now. Yeah in the upcoming chapters I try with the best of my abilities Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections follow that so don't worry. As for the music playing for when Sora was falling I kind of chose that based on how well it fitted with the scene in my head. This story is very interesting so far.
I like Sora and Shy's interaction at the moment. Hope to see more of this story. OK, you made me curious as to what will happen in the next chapter. Still, I got to say that the fight scene between Sora and the girls vs the Heartless was very well written. And reminds me of Steel Soul and Mekapix's depiction of Sora's fighting style. Thanks for the chapter. Thank you, I feel in terms of writing, fighting scenes are more my area and I find that both their depictions were a great way to show Sora's Combat.
As for that next chapter, all I can say is cherish it, cuz it will never happen again haha. Just wanted to let you know that Sora is a full-fledged hero. When the gods in Olympus Coliseum put a person's or people picture in Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections sky, they are considered a true hero. The gods did that for Sora in Kingdom Hearts 2. Also love your story. My favorite Kingdom Hearts story yet. The song was an awesome scene and I liked Shy's shock when Sora told her that he didn't know what a cutie mark was.
My memory came back to me the moment you said that and after the short moment "OMG! Just a friendly heads up, 'bout half the chapter's in italics. Overall, another good chapter. Thank you muchly. Crisis Averted. The chapter was great, especially with the explanation about potions and Sora's clothes.
Can't wait to see Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections girls' faces when they see Sora doing magic. I've read this chapter when it came out, and I have to admit it was pretty good. I liked the part where Rainbow said that Spike's cooking tastes better than Twilight's. Gives a good laugh. A valid point. To be honest, the term big body stuck to me Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections to back when I first started playing the series.
I always ened up calling them that. I'll edit that as soon as I can. And the Boss Heartless I did make up. I wanted a heartless that would could only be taken down through teamwork. So I made that guy. Heh, that's an interesting thought. Though I can't confirm or deny it. I find La Pina - Le Mie Amiche (Remix) more fun to keep readers guessing. This was a really good chapter. Why thank you, Really wanted to keep Sora's battle as true Omae - Various - Harmonic Connections as how it is in his games.
Thus the reason on why he uses his items like that. A small touch, but I thought it was necessary. I think the first holiday Sora should experience would be Nightmare Night since it is almost Halloween.
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